Saturday, 30 November 2013

Short Story - Storyboarding



Action: Close up of man's face (Jacob) looking off into the distance, clearly contemplating things that have happened in his past
Dialogue: Jacob (voice-over) - This is perfect...


Action: Camera pans back, revealing a young girl laying on the floor behind him (Daisy)
Dialogue: Jacob (voice-over) - Soon all this will be over, Daisy can have the life she...


Action: Close up of Daisy, asleep but slowly stirring, disturbed from her slumber
Dialogue: Daisy - Mmmm... daddy...?


Action: Looking at Jacob now, an anguished look on her face
Dialogue: Daisy - I miss mummy, I just want to go home...
Jacob (off screen) So do I baby...


Action: Close up on Jacob, sudden coughing outburst as he grabs his chest
Dialogue: Daisy (off screen) - Daddy?! What's wrong daddy?!


Action: Dropping to his knees, Jacob coughs more violently, losing his composure completely
Dialogue: Daisy (off screen) - DAAAAD!

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